Monday, 23 January 2012

Very early script

(POV shot of kitchen into lounge)
Aleisha - here you go
Abbie - cheers
(phone rings / CLOSE UP)
Aleisha - hello?
(MID)
Phone - you look pretty tonight ...
Aleisha - why thankyou
(Abbie and aleisha both laugh)
- SILENCE - (POV)
Aleisha - who is this?
(MID)
(phone goes dead)
Aleisha (to Abbie) - well, that was odd
(both laugh)
Abbie - right, I better go, cheers for the cuppa
Aleisha - alright, see ya later (sees Abbie out / CLOSE UP) Bye! (LONG)
Abbie - bye
(phone rings / CLOSE UP)
(POV from garden into house)
Phone - thank god she left
Aleisha - what? Who is this?
Phone - you'll see
Aleisha - what's that supposed to mean?
Phone - your hair looks nice straight
Aleisha - who is this? Where are you?
Phone - I can't tell you that ...
(man walks past back window, I turn but he's already gone)

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